Intro to my game

[nickmarksdotcom]

I did have this posted on the other board but I think I belong here in the storytellers section. Tell me what you guys think about it.

This is just the intro and gameplay hasn't really started yet. It is just to get people interested.
http://www.nickmarks.com/game.swf

[nickmarksdotcom]

It gets alot more upbeat after this. I am just trying to get the player off balance

[KathyN]

hmm - 12 a.m. -
that was - interesting -
what comes after?
http://www.skotos.net/ubb/smile.gif

[nickmarksdotcom]

actually I trashed it....I posted on someother boards and people said it was to slow and depressed them. I am starting over with a much more upbeat approach...then I will depress them. Check out the new version here.
http://www.nickmarks.com/Brainwash.swf

[Faer]

For the second one, may I suggest a preload screen while everyone waits for your *show*? Staring at a white screen is rather... uhm.... boring.. http://www.skotos.net/ubb/smile.gif

What you had with the first Version was nice for an intro screen.

The first one was strange. The second one either is just to large to download, or there is a problem with it. You might want to check it out. I use a cable modem and after 5 mins, there was still nothing. http://www.skotos.net/ubb/smile.gif

[Atama]

I second you Faer. I have a cable modem, a 1Ghz Athlon PC with 256 MB RAM, and IE 5.5, and it still sat so long that I gave up.

The first one was cool (and NIN rocks!).